Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Tim's Story (Chapter I)

Iknow this isn't a zombie post, but this is the first chapter of a story that my boyfriend asked me to write for him. It's the first time I've ever tried to write 'D&D' as it's called (I think,) thoughI have read a few books of that genre before. Well, here goes nothing...


   The young elf looked up from her work when she heard the taunts. It seemed as though the half-breed had found himself once more in the wrong place at the wrong time and was now being tortured by the other elves, yet again. She sighed heavily and lowered her head back to the un-fletched arrows in her lap. When would he ever learn. . .

      The mysterious half dark elf had come with his full-elf mother only a few years ago, and had quickly made many enemies. His existence had been somewhat tolerable until his mother was killed when giants attacked the sheltered grove where the elves made their home, but after her death, the dark skinned male had found little peace from the jeers and threats made towards him. He had only been allowed to stay in Ervingallin because of his mother’s reputation with the elders of the tribe.

      The details on his conception and birth were nothing more than rumors passed around by those trying to stay awake on sentry duty, but it was common knowledge that Theanna, the half-elf’s mother, had been captured when dark elves attacked the peaceful woods many years ago, only to return with the strange child and refusing to speak nothing of her history with the dark elves.

      The elf maiden looked up from her fletching again as the acrid scent of smoke tickled her nose. It was coming from the trees on the other side of the clearing where the males had chased the half-elf. She debated on getting the elders, but knew they were tired of dealing with the unending bullying of the dark one. Another, heavier, sigh left her chest as she bundled up her arrows and tossed them into the hollow at the base of her tree. She quickly scaled the side of the tree to her sleeping hollow and grabbed the lavender steal sword hanging on a branch near the entrance, and then swung down to land softly on the mossy ground. It’s only a matter of time before that fool gets himself killed, she thought to herself as she jogged lightly towards the source of the smoke. Why hasn’t he left already like any smart elf would?

      She caught up with the others at Herald’s Tear Pond, where three elf lads circled a light body covered in a dark robe. The oldest of the trio was holding a crude club formed from a tree root and waving it threateningly at the dark shape. “You know it’s time for you to be leaving this place and finding the filthy caverns where your father lives,” he growled. “You know you won’t last much longer up here on the surface, especially if you keep this thieving up!” With the last sentence, He jabbed the club into the half-elf’s stomach, forcing him backwards a step.

      The dark one clenched his fists and glared with at his tormentors with the rich brown eyes so common among the surface elves. “I took nothing of yours, nor would I leave so obvious a trail! You may not consider me an equal, but I am surely not as stupid as you believe,” he growled.

      His show of courage and logic in such a dangerous position clearly did not affect the brash young elves. Another slug from the club brought the fierce half-elf to his knees, but his piercing glare never faltered. A flicker of light on the dark skin of his hand caught the maiden’s attention. She saw a tiny flame dancing there that no one seemed aware of but her. She never would have even noticed it if not for the smell which touched her sensitive nose. The others must have been too involved in their cause to notice how dangerous the situation was rapidly becoming.

     Not one to sit around and let her home burn to the ground, the female softly murmured a spell and watched as a tendril of water reached up and gently extinguished the flame. At the touch of the water on his hand, the dark-skinned elf turned suddenly to face her and said, “Oh, so you’re in one it too now. Why am I not surprised?”

     “I am not with them, as a matter of fact, Skitsora,” she rose from where she had been kneeling by the water’s edge. “I was merely preventing you from burning the entire forest down.

      “I was in complete control!” he shouted at her, temporarily forgetting the others. His anger brought a larger flame to life in his palm. However, a quick bash across the back of his head from the lad holding the club sent the half-elf tumbling into the water where the fire was once again extinguished.

      For a moment, it seemed as though Skitsora would be content just to sit and stare blankly up at the elves, but that was not to be the case. His brown eyes seemed to shine with anger as his signature glare reappeared on his face tenfold. A primal roar erupted from his throat and a loud whoosh swept through the clearing followed by a blast of heat as every tree in sight burst into flames. She stood near the water completely stunned as animals cried out and her own people began bolting; mothers to their children, scholars to their scrolls, and spell casters to the flames themselves.

      She stood frozen, unable to believe the extent of Skitsora’s power, until she felt rough hands grab her arm and pull her into the water just as a crackling branch fell where she had been standing. “Wake up, Aricka! You know, for a healer you can be very stupid sometimes,” the calm voice of the fire-starter himself, along with the cool water, brought her to her senses.

     “You. . . you did this. . . all of this. . .” she stammered. The cool water seeping through her clothes and the heat from the fire against her exposed flesh created a stark contrast both painful and soothing as her mind raced to escape the shock of what had happened. Aricka barely resisted as he slid a damp cloth over her mouth and nose to filter out the smoke.

      “Yeah,” he said weakly. “I guess I did.





      The pair floated in the middle of the pond, well away from the burning trees until finally the fire had died down enough for elves to enter the clearing surrounding Herald’s Tear and finish dousing the flames. Skitsora and Aricka were pulled from the water, dried off, and checked for burns by one of the minor healers in the tribe. Just as the healer was handing a cup of warm tea to Aricka to help with shock, the bear skin covering the entrance to the hollow was thrown open and four elders stormed inside.

      “Skitsora!” demanded Argen, the oldest of the group. “You must come with us at once, or face immediate death.

      Skitsora, who was still shaky from the massive spell he had cast barely had time to utter the word “why” before he was pulled to his feat and dragged from the hollow by two strong hunters. He barely put up a fight even as the hunters leapt from the tree and landed awkwardly, twisting the knee of their shared burden.

      “Hmm, I wonder what they could be taking him so roughly for,” The healer woman mused. “AS far as I know, his only crime was being born with a darker color of skin.”

      The maiden knew all too well what the half-elf was being taken for, and she spilled the cup of tea she had been balancing on one knee as she stood and walked calmly out the door, not even turning to acknowledge the healers noise of dismay as she regarded the spilled liquid.

      When Aricka reached the central clearing of the woods, which still smelled of smoke from the singed trees on its northern edge, she saw that the hunters were still holding onto Skitsora’s arms roughly as te elders spoke to one of the lads who had been tormenting him before the fire. “You’re sure this fire was the fault of the dark-skinned one, Dronjeihm?” a fair-haired elder asked the young elf.

      “Yes, it was him. A fire kept igniting in his hand while we were talking to him, and then he became extremely angry and the entire clearing caught fire,” he said looking the elder in the eye.

      “He was provoked!” She was surprised by the strength of her own voice echoing through the silent clearing. “Skitsora was being tormented by Dronjeihm and his allies, Grollen and Oakleaf.”

      “Is this true?” the elder asked as he turned his attention back to the now nervous lad. “Did you and the other two indeed provoke Skitsora?”

      “Well, he stole Grollen’s hunting knife. We found it sticking out of the base of his tree when we were looking for it,” the young elf looked at the tops of his shoes as he spoke.

      “He’s lying,” Skitsora’s voice cut in before the elder could speak. “I took nothing. I’ve never taken anything from anyone. Besides, if I even wanted to steal his knife, I wouldn’t have left it out in the open. Just because my skin is darker than yours doesn’t mean I am more stupid or evil than you.”

      The elders asked a few more questions before gathering to converse among themselves. Aricka heard only a few snatches or language as she waited nervously near Dronjeihm. She knew that she had taken a risk in speaking up at a meeting she was never supposed to be at, but she also knew in her heart that what she had done was right. Skitsora had been provoked and wrongfully accused by the lads. Granted, he had no reason to destroy so much life in the peaceful existence of Ervingallin, but he need not be charged with setting the fire unprovoked. Besides, she knew that the penalty of lying to the elders about petty theft would find the half-elf’s tormentors a punishment much less desirable.

    After several tense moments, the elders turned back to the accused, the accuser, and the uninvited guest. The head elder, Kurina, stepped forward from the group and said to Dronjeihm, “Skitsora’s intelligence is common knowledge, so it is unlikely he stole this knife you seem to value so greatly, and though a knife owned by one so young as Grollen must surely be truly valuable, it would appear as though you have found the lost thing and therefore, there is no trouble concerning that.” The other elders chuckled softly as Kurina continued speaking, her own voice tinged with humor. “However, we cannot allow the destruction of any part of our precious grove to go unpunished,” her voice grew serious as she turned her gleaming blue eyes to Skitsora. ”We have given you shelter and a place to call home for years even after the death of your mother. We have ensured that no trouble come to the son of one of our finest warriors. However, your actions have become increasingly unpredictable, and no one in this tribe has the experience needed to train one such as yourself. Therefore, we have decided that it is time for you to move on and find a better place to call home. Somewhere you may cause less harm for others as well as yourself.”

      Skitsora’s dark face seemed to almost pale as the elder finished speaking. Though no words escaped the tight line of his lips, his emotions were easy enough to see. Anger and pain danced across his eyes as he struggled not to speak his mind and find himself with an even worse penalty, though he could not see how anything could be worse than being banished from the only home he remember.

    “You will be given traveling supplies and escorted to the edge of Ervingallin at dawn’s first light. After that, if you are seen within the boundaries of our tribe, our warriors will suffer no ill fate for killing you on sight. Do we have an understanding?” Kurina finished.

     Aricka watched in dismay as the dark head of Skitsora bobbed once in a determined nod. She opened her mouth to defend him once more but received sharp looks from both the half-elf and many of the elders which silenced all complaints she had been about to speak.



      The young elf maiden was kept awake by the anger boiling in her veins brought by the unfair banishment of Skitsora. Though she had never had a real friendship with the dark skinned elf, she felt strongly about justice, and knew from the looks on the elders’ faces that the fire was merely an excuse to banish him. They didn’t want to keep protecting Skitsora from would-be attackers who hated him simply for the dark color of his skin.

     Her anger came from more than just a strong desire for justice. She also knew of the passion and devotion the strange elf was capable of. She had often found him shooting arrow after arrow at a target, casting pointless spells over and over, or performing precarious routines with knives, swords, axes, anything he could get his hands on it seemed, when she was out gathering feathers for fletching or components for her spells. She knew that the few things that brought peace to the troubled elf’s mind were also the few things he could spend hours meditating over. Others, who despised the color of Skitsora’s skin, would find such activities suspicious, and devise some story that he was practicing such skills as a way to defeat the elves of Ervingallin when his darker family decided to attack again.

      Aricka was not one to believe such nonsense. She had found that her isolated tribe was quite judgmental of things they knew little of; things like Skitsora and his skills. Her two decades of life had supplied her with all she needed to know about her homeland, and ten years of knowing Skitsora had supplied her with all she needed to know about the dark skinned one.

      The rising sun shed light on an elf dressed for travel with a light pack strapped to her back, a bow and quiver of arrows slung over her slender shoulders, and a pale purple blade hanging at her hip.



     Slipping out of the small village was easy for the other elves were used to seeing Aricka going out to explore the forest. She had been taken in by one of the most respectable healers the tribe had ever known after her mother died on a trip to the human settlement of Felslora, and her grief-stricken father disappeared, abandoning the couple’s young child. Growing up under the care of Gradelva had taught Aricka many things about magic and how to use it for healing, and the many trips she had made with her mentor outside the camp and into the surrounding woods where they spent weeks camping and studying the animals and herbs that could be used for medicines had given her a chance to see much more in her 20 years than even some of the elders had in their sheltered lives, for few had ever ventured far from their little village in the woods, and even fewer had made a habit of it.

     The brown-haired elf was waiting in a tree above the main road leading from Ervingallin when Skitsora was escorted out of the village. She could almost feel the anger rolling off his mind in waves as one of the warriors tossed him a pack. His dark eyes shot a penetrating glare at the elf who had handed him the pack, which only received him a rough shove. “Don’t you even think of returning to Ervingallin with any of your dark elf kin to destroy the rest of our home. If you do, we will kill you first in a way that will make even the evilest of dark elves think twice of ever coming to the surface again!”

      Skitsora glared once more before spinning around to leave behind the most accepting home he had ever known.



      Aricka followed the dark-skinned elf’s path from the treetops as he walked, stopping only to gather food and rest when it became too dark to see where his next foot would fall. She soon found herself regretting her urgency to pack when her supply of dried berries and jerky ran out, leaving her to find food and follow Skitsora at the same time, which proved difficult due to his fast pace. Never the less, all went relatively smoothly for the first four days.

      She watched from the branches of a tall oak as Skitsora built a small fire and started roasting a small squirrel he had caught while walking earlier that day. She jammed her pack against the trunk of the tree and lay back as he did the same on the ground almost a hundred feet below. Sleep was just starting to cloud her mind when a deep growl came from a few braches below her. Suddenly alert, she grabbed for her bow and aimed an arrow downward, searching for the source of the growl. For several moments, everything was still and silent. Suddenly, a movement in the darkness caught her eye, and a dark silhouette became visible. A giant tree cat; one of the fiercest creatures of the Northern woods.

      The animal was crouched on a branch about thirty feet below the Aricka. The cat was waiting to pounce on Skitsora, who lay sleeping, unaware of the danger so many feet above him. Aricka could see the outline of his dark face in the light of the dying coals from his fire. Aricka tensed and drew back her arrow, but she was too late. The big cat pounced...

      A great yowl belonging to some kind of giant creature woke Skitsora. He bolted to his feet and drew his sword as a huge body crashed through the branches above his head and fell into the tiny clearing where he had made camp. The cat landed roughly on the ground before getting shakily to its feet. It staggered slowly towards the elf, but Skitsora was on the beast before it could go more than a few steps. He made work work of slicing the cat’s throat with a well-aimed slash of his blade. Once the cat’s final twitches had ceased, he knelt to examine his kill. There was an arrow protruding from the tree cat’s back. The feathers on the end of the arrows shaft were died a pale purple. Even though the true color of the feathers was obscured, Skitsora knew they were from a snowy owl. That was the only one elf who would go through the trouble of finding the white feathers of the owl and dying them before fletching them just so. He had never met another elf so obsessed with something so insignificant.

      “Alright, Aricka. You can come out now,” he called to the trees.

      The braches rustled for several moments before the silhouette of Aricka appeared. “Why are you following me?” Skitsora asked her calmly.

      “I wanted to get out of there,” she replied just as calmly. “Besides. It would seem that you needed someone to watch your back. You were sleeping so heavily, if I hadn’t of wounded that cat for you, you’d be nothing but bones and drying blood by now.”

      Two dark eyes seemed to shoot razor-sharp arrows at her as she chuckled. “I would have been just fine. And why would you want to leave? You were on your way to being the next great healer.”

      “Among a herd of elves as stupid as the cows humans like.” Skitsora looked stunned at the comparison.

      “You’re going to have to go back,” he said firmly.

      “Oh?”

      “Yes. I don’t want you with me, so you’ll have to go back.”

      “Says who? No one owns these woods and honestly, the last thing I need is to hear that you got yourself killed because I wasn’t there to wound all the monsters that want dark elf for dinner.”

     With one final glare, Skitsora turned away angrily and swung his supplies onto one shoulder before trudging away into the darkness. “You know, I’ll just follow you until you let me travel with you,” Aricka said just before he stepped from the light of the coals she was coaxing back to life.

      Skitsora paused. There would be no shaking this determined elf. Someone who could spend so much time doting over the fletching on her arrows would never falter in her quest to join a half dark elf. Too much adventure and excitement were promised in the journey. Frustrated with himself for giving in so easily, he threw his pack back on the ground and leaned back against it. The unlikely pair fell into an uneasy slumber with hardly another word shared between them.

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